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（1）In order to protect our environment and advocate a low carbon lifestyle, an activity will be organized by the Students’ Union of our school from July 14 to July 18. （2）During the activity, we will clean the playground and water the trees and flowers. （3）What’s more, we will collect waste paper, old books, empty cans and old toys, which will be sorted before being sent to the recycling center. （4）To live a low-carbon life, we should switch off all electric liances and water taps when they are not in use and use less plastic bags and disposable products. （5）Besides, it is better for us to take a bus or walk to school. |
| 试题分析：这是一篇围绕“保护环境，低碳生活”的主题英语倡议书。倡议对象的称呼已写好。接着是写节约的具体措施。主要包括：?打扫操场, 给植物浇水；收集旧报纸、 旧书、空罐头盒、废玩具, 分类后送交回收中心；?在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食；及时关闭电器电源，节约用水，少用塑料包装袋和一次性商品和多乘坐公交车或步行上学四部分内容。结尾要表示发出号召和希望。最后也可以写上发倡议者的名称。 倡议书的写作，先写对发出倡议对象的称呼。2、正文：（1）写清楚发出此倡议的原因或目的。只有交代清楚倡议活动的目的、意义即重要性，倡议对象才能理解、才能取自觉的行动来响应，否则就很难响应，起不到倡议应有的作用。（2）重点是写倡议的具体内容和要求及要求做到的具体事项。这部分一般是分条开列，以求清晰、明确。（3）结尾要表示倡议者的决心和希望。（4）最后要写上发倡议者的名称。 亮点说明范文使用一些如what’s more, besides等承接词进行连接,使文章层次清晰。多变的高级句式如定语从句的使用What’s more, we will collect waste paper, old books, empty cans and old toys, which will be sorted before being sent to the recycling center.及it作形式主语的句型it is better for us to take a bus or walk to school.等；高级词汇和短语的灵活运用，如advocate a low carbon lifestyle，switch off all electric liances，in use，disposable products等 |
| How are things going? In your last letter you talked about low carbon life. Now I’d like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months. With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it. Interestingly, our school called on us students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the eal, I he made some changes in my way of life, which range from transportation to water sing. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. Just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse water, even though it is not so convenient. The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity. I’m really glad to communicate with you about this topic. Yours, LiHua |
| 试题分析：本文是一篇材料作文，题干虽然所提供的内容比较多，但是实际给出的要点却比较少，其开放程度同样较大。不过考生对此话题非常熟悉，写起来有话可说。题干内容多，给考生带来处理要点的难度，因此写好本篇书面表达的关键是：选择要点，挖掘要点和正确表达。题干所提供的内容比较多，在表达时无需面面俱到，这就要根据题干选择我们表达时必须的要点：围绕“对低碳生活的理解、学校开展的活动、最近生活方式的改变”等三个方面结合“做有责任的公民，过低碳生活”去挖掘要点。本篇书面表达的基本时态为现在时(一般现在时和现在完成时)。偶尔会用到一般过去时，如：提及学校组织的活动时就要用到。但是接着讲“最近生活方式的改变”时，就要用现在范畴的时态了。 亮点说明范文长句多，充分展示了作者驾驭句子的能力。复合句固然长，但是简单句也显得不那么简单，也比较长。比如“For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school.”就达20个字。全文共8句(不包括所给的部分)，涉及简单句3个，复合句5个，开头句和最后依据非常吸引人的眼球。开头句中用了“with”复合结构“With the environment problem coming into attention”，还用了非常靓丽的复合句 “it is extremely important that we take action to protect our planet”.最后一句更是错综复杂：总体说，这是一个复合句，由主句“The TV and the computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead”加“which”引导的非限制性定语从句“which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity”；主句中包含了并列句“but we sometimes read instead”；该句中还用了一个插入语“I think”对整个长句起到了缓冲的作用。短语“make a difference，In response to，range from transportation to water sing”等的使用也彰显了作者扎实的语言基本功。 |
| Dear Ann, I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on what we can do to se energy for a better future. If we want to se energy then we need to change the way we behe. On the one hand, we need to buy liances that are more energy efficient and limit the amount of time we use them. On the other hand, to reduce the effect the greenhouse gases he on our atmosphere, we should plant more trees. As we all know, trees can absorb carbon dioxide and so they help to counter the smoke produced by our cars. What we may also do is to turn off lights even for a few minutes, for good habits can contribute to reducing the negative effects of waste. In short, if everyone cares about our earth, our efforts will make a difference. Best wishes Li Hua |
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To decrease the use of coal and protect the environment, there are multiple solutions we can use. First, we could stop cutting down trees and plant more trees, which decrease the production of coals. Second, we can se energy in our daily life by taking bick or public transportation, rather than driving a car. We can also limit the emission of the exhaust of vihicles by making certain laws of vihicles' production. In addition, we can use some other energy source to replace the coal. For instance, we can use clean energy, such as solar energy and wind energy.
Through these ways, I believe we could bring a change to the environment and make the world better!
为了逻辑上的自然稍微调整了一下要求的短语出现的顺序，但是应该符合你的要求
教学中要渗透环保意识,加强环保教育,这样既有利于学生巩固教学知识,又培养了学生爱护环境、保护环境的意识。你会做英语环保手抄报吗?下面是我为大家带来的，希望大家喜欢。
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Low carbon life begin from me
The earth is our home, we should protect it, don't pollute it. Low carbon life is life, less energy consumption, to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide emissions, reducing air pollution, slow deterioration of the environment.
Low carbon life, actually very simple. Students, when you take a shower, shampoo and wash my face and brush my teeth when I, you ever can he thought, to se every drop of water? When you use the lights, TV, puter, you may he thought to se electricity each? Participate in low carbon life is not for the moment, but the eternal topic.
Now the humanity faces the problem of global warming, carbon is causing global warming killer, and this is because the human act recklessly and care for nobody waste of resources, make carbon emissions increased, therefore, the real arch-criminal should be human. But human can't produce carbon, therefore, must take the environmental protection, and civilized way of life -- low carbon life.
Low carbon life as long as the attention of 4 sections: electricity, water, oil, solar term on the line.
Previously, I do not know how to se, all the love and light, from day to black; water, is often a waste … … To promote low-carbon life, know that there are many benefits to se.
低碳生活从我做起
地球是我们的家园，我们应该保护它，不要污染它。低碳生活，就是指生活中少耗能量，尽力减少碳的排放，特别是二氧化碳的排放量，减少对大气的污染，减缓生态恶化。
做到低碳生活，其实很简单。同学们，在你洗脸刷牙、洗发洗澡的时候，你我可曾想过，节约每一滴水?在你使用电灯、电视、电脑的时候，你可曾想过节约每一度电?参与低碳生活不是一时的、而是永恒的话题。
现在人类面临着全球变暖的问题，碳就是导致地球变 暖的凶手，而这正是因为人类肆无忌惮的浪费，使得碳的排放量增加，所以，真正的罪魁祸首应该是人类。可是人类不能不产生碳，所以，就要取环保、文明的生活方式——低碳生活。
低碳生活只要注意4个节：节电、节水、节油、节气就行了。
以前，我不懂得节约，整天都爱开灯，并且从白天开到黑;水呢，也是常常的浪费……直到倡导低碳生活，才知道节约原来有很多好处。
二、英语小笑话
Amos asked his mother whether they could he a video.
I’m afraid we can’t afford one, sighed his mother.
But on the following day in came Amos, staggering beneath the weight of a brand-new video.
How on earth did you pay for that? gasped his mother.
Easy, Mum. replied Amos, I sold the television!
艾莫斯问妈妈他们是否能买一台录影机。
恐怕我们还买不起，妈妈叹息著说。
可第二天当艾莫斯回来时，他摇摇晃晃地搬著一台全新的录影机。
你究竟是哪儿来的钱买这东西?妈妈大吃一惊，喘着气说。
妈妈，这简单， 艾曼斯回答。我把电视机给卖了!
三、保护环境的英语句子
1、It's everyone's duty to love and protect the environment.
爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任和义务。
2、But some people don't care about it.
但是有些人却不关心或不在意。
3、The most important question in the world today is pollution.
当今世界最重要的话题就是污染问题。
4、The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。
5、Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.
更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。
6、They waste a lot of water in their daily life.
日常生活中他们浪费很多水。
7、Something must be done to stop the pollution.
人类必须取一些措施来制止污染。
8、They throw rubbish into rivers , too.
他们还乱扔垃圾到河流理去。
9、Do not throw rubbish onto the ground. Do not waste water. Use both sides of paper when you write. Stop using plastic bags for shopping. Make classrooms less noisy.
不要在地上扔垃圾。不要浪费水。当你写字时要在纸的两面都要写。停止使用塑料袋去购物。减少教室里德吵闹声。
10、Planting trees Trees are very helpful and important for us.
树对我们人类是多么的重要和有用。
The earth would be better if everyone advocate low-carbon lifestyle with actions.
只要行动起来提倡低碳生活,地球将会变的更美好
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| Dear friends: Do you want to live in a beautiful world? So it is our responsibility to he low carbon life style, which matters more and more in energy sing and environmental protection. To fulfill it, we should bear the following habits in mind. First, it’s important to turn off taps and lights and recycle everything recyclable in our daily life. What’s more, while sticking to the habit of setting the temperature of your air conditioner at above 26℃ in summer and eating fruits and vegetables on seasons, we should also climb stairs under the fifth floor instead of taking lifts. Let’s all take action now and contribute to the prosperity of our mother – the earth. Thank you! |
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