Changes in My Life
There he been many changes in my life. With the development of the economy my life is better off. For the clothing I he spare money to buy sorts of pretty clothes. But in the past there were fewer clothes in my wardrobe. For the food I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal rice noodles or streamed ban with one or two light dishes even preserved pickles. Nowadays I can afford any delicious food including western foods. For the housing I he moved from a cramped and gloomy room to a big and bright flat. For the getting around I rode an old bike on my way to work a year ago. At present I drive my private car to trel. I believe my life will be better and better in the future.
希望帮到你哈
描写思路：以大学生活内容作为主题，深刻地表现出来，正文：
College life, every high school students dream to experience.
大学生活，每一个高中生都梦寐以求的的想去体验一番。
As soon as it gets light, you can see someone reading a foreign language in the shade of a tree.
天色刚亮，就能够看到校园里有人在树阴中读外语了。
That kind of attentive earance, let pedestrians put light step, afraid to disturb them.
那种专注的样貌，让行人都放轻了步子，怕打扰了他们。
Find a seat to sit down, take out the textbook, a day of college life began.
找个座位坐下来，掏出课本，一天的大学生活拉开了序幕。
The class soon immersed in the teacher's wonderful lectures, thoughts flying with the teacher, the old professor's face full of youthful glory.
课堂上很快就沉浸到老师精彩的讲课中去，思绪跟着老师在飞扬，年迈的教授脸上透着青春的光彩。
The time after school in the afternoon is the most unforgettable. It's the time that I can allocate. I can go to the Internet, date, dinner, etc.
下午放学后的时光是最难忘的，这是自己能够分配的时刻了，能够去上网，约会，聚餐，等等。
Unknowingly spent two years of college life, these two years are really ups and downs.
不知不觉度过了两年的大学生活了，这两年中真的是酸甜苦辣都有。
In any case, we are growing up day by day, mature, step by step towards their dreams.
不管怎样样，我们都在一天天的长大，成熟，一步一步向着自己的梦想前进着。
Finally, I might as well say: my college life is really wonderful.
最后，也不妨说一句：我的大学生活，真的很精彩。
| No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves hy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes when a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage. A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake hened in Wen Chuan/over took Wen Chuan. Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness.? It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we smile as much as possible. |
| 试题分析：本文谈论的话题是微笑的作用，要求结合生活中的事例。属于开放性作文的写作，以第三人称为主，主要使用一般现在时。在讲述过去发生的事情的时候可以使用一般过去时。要点：1.叙述微笑的巨大作用，可以使用谚语。2.使用具体事例：可以是身边发生的事情；3.总结：既然微笑的作用是如此巨大，那么在我们以后的生活中就尽量多微笑。完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。 亮点说明本文中最大的特点是高级句式的运用非常到位，如第一段中的部分倒装句：Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves hy, but also it enables others to feel delighted.否定词not only放在了句首，后面的主句使用了部分倒装的形式。文章最后一句It is suggested that we smile as much as possible.使用了主语从句中的虚拟语气用法。 |
My father is strong and tall.He has two big eues.His hands are long.He likes to singing and running.Often he runs in the park.Then he sits on the bench.He likes me ang my mother.He forite fruit is les and pineles.
From Monday to Friday he works in his company.From Saturday to Sunday he he break in house.In Saturday's mornings he often in the park.In afternoons he washes hia car.In evenings he watches TV and sleep.On Sunday'mornings he in the park,too.In the afternoons he in the garden.In evenings he play computer and sleep.
Oh!How busy he is.
in everyday life , ordinary life. .
快乐的过日子 lead/live a hy life. live hily. enjoy every day.
