1.He like some eggplants for lunch.
He likes some eggplant for lunch.
解释：因为茄子eggplant在表示为一道烹饪过的菜式时，是不可数的
he 后面用likes
2. She has orange juices.
She has orange juice.
解释：果汁类是不可数的
3.Zongzi is one of the traditional China food.
Zongzi is one of the traditional Chinese food.
解释：中国食物Chinese foof 或者China's food.
4.He he a banana for breakfast.
He has/ had a banana for breakfast.
解释：he 第三人称，应该用单数形式的现在时或者过去时
5.I he a egg and milk.
I he an egg and milk.
解释：egg 为元音字母开头，用an
病句一：Ging-Give the book to me,please.
病句二：Put the box 去掉at here.
病句三：Here is an other-another phtotgraph of my family.
病句四：The boat is in-on a river.
病句五：I'm going to paint the desk去掉to white.
病句六：Don't putting-put it on the floor.
病句七：What are you going to do withthis box?
病句八：Do-Are you doing your homework?
病句九：They are cleaning thier toothes-teeth.
病句十：Show 去掉to me your new drees.
第一句，the 改为a
第二句，缺主语，句首加I
第三句，recall改为overcome，the school前面加when
第五句，Day after day and time passed by,the National day is coming.
While studying, （in study是在书房的意思，study在这里就变成名称了，但是我觉得你是学习中的意思）they consider their own fate, the feeling is really tangled and very confused.
However, study is always the most important thing,
POSTER teacher let me endless frustration.(这句我不知道你想表达什么意思）
But surprised, I treat it carefully.
We used two hours to studies up in writing my SOCIAL POSTER and the topic was Chinese Identity.
all of the social classes are full of ss posters
I suddenly found my school is so beautiful,even the cafeteria, the play ground,the sky above our school,The way to school
In this way(in this way是这样的意思，你这里的way是路还是泛指？）, life in an orderly manner over a month.
A month of thought and sentiment.
A month of growing and experiences.
A month of tangled and suffering.
Finally I decided to stay here.
Because I can not live without the people here who are enthusiasm and friendly. I can not live without my good friends and teachers here.
Even though I know there are going to be a lot of _______
Even though I knew there will be a lot of people lee us right away .
Because I know we will together face more difficulties and challenges in the future .
Our future will be far apart cheering for each other.
We still he a lot of good agreements(goals) and plans.
We will definitely live up to.
Because we he now done the first step:
Even though far apart, they do not forget themselves to each other.
These wonderful visions and goals are our motivation.
We are ready to pay all the sacrifice and aiming at our common faiths and hiness.
And everyone here reciates the hardships and hiness.
I know that our school will become more beautiful, the sky will be more blue.
1. Let's visit Smiths' together.
2. Who runs faster than you in your class?
3. In New York, there are a lot of rains in spring.
4.What's your weight?
5.I'm going to a concert .
6.What are you going to do at 10:10 on tomorrow morning?
7.My borther Jack likes living in Chain .
8.Would you like to come with us?
9.That is a picture of my father at home .
不知道改的对不对，只是我的建议。
病句也太多了吧。。。。第一句，就是到第一个句号（问号）的地方。整个就是一个大病句，为啥要用问号呢？
你不知道其中有多少个地方应该加句号了。
第二句我干脆看不懂。。时态也乱七八糟的。
你重新写吧，，主要句子的完整性先。然后是时态，单复数。这几个问题搞好了，基本上就没有病句了。
1. We he computer class one week a time.
2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.
3. There he 100 books.
4. I study there very hy.
5. I usually swimming there.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
7. Several hours after, he was surprised.
8. He had to asked the other one.
9. He thought he speak well.
10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .
11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.
12. This film is very good-looking .
13. It is very good to family look.
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.
16. I he a future dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life road.
18. I think everything must be change a lot.
19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.
20. But I singing not very well.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.
22. Almost students use the computer not study.
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
24. When I was very small.
怎么样,找出错误没有啊. 下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧.
1. I he computer class once a week.
英语中表达频率次数时:一次 once, 两次 twice 从三次开始用 three times ...
2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.
这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作由后面的you 发出.
3. There are 100 books.
表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.
4. I study there very hily.
Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词hy.
5. I usually swim there.
-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.
6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.
这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题. 如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:
By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.
7. Several hours later, he was surprised.
使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.
8. He had to ask the other one.
“He to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用动词原形.
9. He thought he spoke well.
这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.
10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .
一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词..
11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.
首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副词.
12. This film is very interesting.
这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一般用来形容人物的.
13. It is fit for family to enjoy.
又是一个中文式的句子,
14. I think we can’t live Internet.
学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.不改变原意的基础上,我们修改为:
I think we can’t rely on Internet.
15. Most people use the net to send the mails.
这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.
16. I he a dream about future..
Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.
17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.
“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。
18. I think everything keeps on changing.
不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思.
19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do.
宾语从句要使用正常语序.
20. But I don’t sing very well.
动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用..一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙.
21. Tom’s mum didn’t care about him.
Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。
22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study.
一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。
23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.
这是一个中文式表达的句子，按照上下文来看，我们修改为：
Most of people like sending mail in the internet.
24. When I was a little child.
Small 用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。
